Monday, October 28, 2019

My 9th Annual Halloweensie Contest Entry

Here is my entry for Susanna Leonard Hill's 9th Annual Halloweensie Contest. The rules are that the story must be for children (12 and under), and has to be 100 words or less. It must include the words potioncobweb, and trick. Of  course, it must be Halloween themed. Enjoy mine and comment with your thoughts. Then go to Susanna's website and read all the other entries! Or join in the fun. You have until Halloween at midnight to post your own Halloweensie story!

Trixie the Witch and her Halloween Tricks - Episode 13: Perfect Cobweb Potion (100 words)

Welcome to the show my creepy crones and conjurers.

It's Halloween and cobweb potion is a must for repelling those annoyingly cute trick-or-treaters.

The trick to perfect cobweb potion is using quality cobwebs.

The trick to getting quality cobwebs is finding giant spiders.

The trick to finding giant spiders is going deep into the haunted forest.

The trick to going deep into the haunted forest is not getting eaten by giant spiders.

The trick to not getting eaten by giant spiders is running away empty-handed and giving out candy to those irritatingly cute kids again this year.

18 comments:

Nancy Riley said...

Yes, leave the creepy forest and enjoy the treat-or-treaters!

Anonymous said...

I would rather be annoyed by trick-or-treaters than turned into a smoothie by a giant spider. Eek! Good luck!

Corine Timmer

Kaylynn Johnsen said...

Run away. What a fun ending.

Colleen Murphy said...

Ha Ha! I wholeheartedly. I don't think I would have ever stepped foot in that forest! Good luck!

Diane Tulloch said...

This was very clever. I would run a mile than venture into the forest.

McMarshall said...

When all else fails, had over the candy! Good Luck.

Sarah Tobias, Writer and Artist said...

Very clever. Love how you build up the tension and then do what any self-respecting human would do.

Jolene Gutiérrez said...

So fun! I enjoyed the building of the story and the humor at the end! :) Good luck!

Nicole Loos Miller said...

Hah! In envisioned this like a documentary-gone-wrong. Love it :)

Sue Heavenrich said...

The trick to ... well, this was fun to read. I can imagine someone narrating it in a deadpan voice.

Anne Lipton said...

Wonderful, wi\ckedly humorous parody of cooking/DIY shows. Terrific way to circle the story at the end.

Kelly Conroy said...

Great escalation! Very fun!

Jaclyn Crawford said...

Love the repetition and escalation. Good luck!

Eleanor Ann Peterson-author said...

This was so cute, great ending!

Read/Write/Run said...

I like your entry. One of your sentences has all three words too. Nice job and good luck.

Jilanne Hoffmann said...

Yes, the best solution is NOT to brave the forest. Great story!

Monica Acker said...

Ha! I love the build.

Jean James said...

Ha ha, very funny. What's a little candy distribution to annoying kids, compared to giant man eating spiders! Good luck in the contest.